The value of critique group

Last Thursday I attended critique group. I had two pieces to be worked and one “show and tell”.

I started out explaining I was competing in the 30 Paintings in 30 Days Challenge and showing off this piece.

croppedThen I showed this piece and explained I didn’t know where to go next.

abstractHere’s what I did with their suggestions.

critiquegroupI’m still not done, but at least progress is happening.

Finally, I showed them this painting.

loungingI explained I was interested in going bigger and asked for thoughts. This crop was suggested.

loungingredoIf I decide to go bigger, I know where to go.

The value

I’ve been debating whether to go further with this post… and I’m gotta do it.

While we were discussing a piece (painted by a very, VERY talented artist who has been painting a long time, and in fact someone I have taken a class from) a woman who lives in the building came in and listened to our comments (our group meets in a retirement home that has a big, “public” art area for residents.) This particular woman, who apparently lives in this retirement community, has walked into our group before.

wpid-busybody-kitteh2But let me step back a minute and explain about critique group.

The idea of critique group is that a group of painters (or writers, or sculptors, or jugglers…) gets together and combines their expertise to improve their skills. Most critique groups follow a format of one painter puts up a recent work, everyone studies it, then make suggestions. The painter may or may not decide to follow the suggestions.

The best critique groups are very impersonal (at least about the art part.) Members may know that other members prefer a certain subject, color palette, or technique, but they bring an analytic eye to the process and discuss widely agreed upon principles of art. The poster below covers most of them, though some may be added or subtracted.

Art-PrinciplesMore experienced painters may also bring knowledge of how jurors look at art or what is likely to be accepted into a show.

The main point is that critique-ers are not criticizing the piece or the artist; they are critiquing.

Critique ~ [kri-teek] (noun)
1. an article or essay criticizing a literary or other work; detailed evaluation; review.
2. a criticism or critical comment on some problem, subject, etc.
3. the art or practice of criticism.
verb (used with object), critiqued, critiquing.
4. to review or analyze critically.

There is an element of trust to this process. There is a trust (sometimes hard to establish and keep) that criticizing is NOT happening; that any comments are made from a place of wanting to improve the piece; that the critique-er knows what they are talking about. And there is a trust that everyone has the best of intentions.

If the artist feels vulnerable, so does the critique-er because they know that if their suggestion is NOT taken it shows a lack of faith in that suggestion (and maybe in the critique-er themself.) Additionally, every artist has the opportunity to put up their work, so the whole group is in the same boat of laying themselves bare.

Into this seen walks a random woman who:

  1. Is not part of this group
  2. Is not an artist
  3. Has not been invited / accepted into the group

While completely distracting everyone by moving around the room, she listens to our comments and then boldly announces —

indexShe tells us that the piece is wonderful and that if she could paint like that she wouldn’t change a thing. That the piece reminds her of (insert a name of famous painter here) and that she met this painter and therefore is qualified to judge the piece is PERFECT!

Here’s the thing. This incident goes beyond annoying. It’s insulting.

The Insult

Why is it insulting?

It’s insulting to the artist who has spent hours on the painting and still knows something is off and can’t quite find it on her own.

It’s insulting because it devalues ALL the time and effort the artist has spent getting it to a stage where she is willing to ask: “What should I do?”

It’s insulting because it says the artist is not qualified to judge her own work.

And last of all it’s insulting to the group, not because our opinions are overridden (the artist can make that choice herself,) but because this interloper is negating the trust we have worked so hard to establish.

Here’s the thing, though, that I’ve really been thinking about over the last few days.

It’s insulting because it implies that artists have no need to develop their talent.

To try to clarify my point, I went online to find some quotes about this.

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i-dont-think-theres-any-artist-of-any-value-who-doesnt-doubt-what-theyre-doing-francis-ford-coppolaBut the one that comes closest is this.

images-7So I Shouldn’t Compliment An Artist?

I finished this blog, went to bed, and knew I needed to clarify this last point.

No. Please, if you like an artist, tell them. Or better yet, purchase their work. Unless you are part of that artist’s critique group, you are seeing works the artist has judged “ready” and “finished.” The work has been done and the artist is prepared. While I wouldn’t suggest it, the artist is ready for any criticism that come their way. They are ready to answer questions and describe the process.Compliment anything you like about the work: color, content, creativeness. Ask the artist what inspired the piece.

likeBut don’t assume that the artist is just cruising on talent. Remember, no matter how talented that artist is, a lot of hard work went into what you are admiring. Respect that.

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Catching up (in so many areas)

Sometimes when I am talking to friends and they tell me stuff about their lives, I feel foolish because I have NO memory of them telling me about any of this stuff… except they did.

Then comes a week like this week and I realize why that is: It’s all I can do to keep up my my life.

Maggie Choate

On Tuesday my mom (Maggie) went in for hip replacement surgery. She’s been in pretty severe pain for a long while now and if my dad hadn’t been going through his illness, this probably would have happened sooner. The last year has allowed Mom to do the necessary research and become comfortable that this was the next step.

The surgery went well and she’s recovering nicely. I wasn’t able to be with her until Friday night, but we talked while she was in the hospital (Tuesday-Friday) and one of her friends drove her home and stayed with her until I could get there.

I think that was the point she kind of conked out. She looks great and is so much more mobile than I thought she would be, but it was obvious that she was ready to be out of the hospital (loud, noisy, and full of people) and home (quiet, familiar and only me (take that how you want).)

I knew from talking to her (and just knowing her for the last ____ years) that my job this weekend was to be there and be quiet. So I brought my painting stuff and vowed to catch up on my painting.

Totally good move.

When I left Sunday evening a few of her friends stopped by for a pizza party and agreed she was looking good. She’ll still be recovering for a while, but she’s on the mend and says she can already feel the improvement in her hip.

Painting

To recap, I am currently behind in posting nine paintings. But it’s not as bad as it looks.

Sept 16

sept 16So I got a little more behind this week because Tuesday and Wednesday were not “normal” work days, but full-day trainings with a working lunch. I did get this piece painted. I am liking where it’s going enough to keep it in the pile, but I suspect it will really change if I continue. Still, it’s paint covering a whole piece of paper, so I’m keeping it in the challenge.

Sept 17

sept 17

Thursday was raining intermittently, so I painted the view from my desk.

Did you know clouds move?

September 18

sept 18This is yet another of Mill Creek. I tried to capture not just the ripple but a ray of sunlight on the water. Very mixed results on that.

So with these three, I’m only behind six. Thus begins my weekend work.

Catch Up 1 – Bear

bearI need to work on the eyes, but other than that, I’m not sure where else to go with this. I like the colors, but other than that, it’s just not cutting it for me. I’ll take it to critique group and see what they say.

Catch Up 2 – Metallic Pears Experiment

pearsI actually started this on September 13, but I wasn’t sure where to go. So I decided to experiment with some metallic pigments I scored at a garage sale. Very interesting…

Catch Up 3 – Ice Dragon

icedragonThis is another one that I’m not calling done, but I have decided where to go. It’s a piece that started out as just putting down some colors to try to get me painting again. I’ve decided it’s a chained ice dragon. I got to the point where it was sketched in… I just need to finish. I’m putting it in the painting list… call me a cheater if you want.

Catch Up 4 – Stealth Painting

stealthI can’t show you this.

It’s also not done.

But considering I painting on it for 4 hours this weekend, and my week day paintings have been 1 hour… I’m including it!

Catch Up 5 – Gelli Plates

A few weeks ago I purchased a new, larger Gelli plate and a patterning tools. This was my first chance to play with them, and I’m calling this a win.

So… to summarize: I have one more catch up and then I’ll be on track.

Moving On

So the last of the big catch up bulletins of the week has to do with my living arrangements.

Six months ago, when I accepted the job as Grants Payment Coordinator with OWEB down in Salem, I knew that a change in location was probably going to follow.

I had been getting to that point anyway; I’m getting older and government work has a lot of security. While my crystal ball has been busted for AGES, I suspect that I’m going to stay with the way of life that offers the most security. The terrible 2011-2012 year just wore me out.

Unless I got a job with Clackamas County, future jobs will require a commute from Oregon City. Before I got a job with OWEB, I had been contemplating trying to move closer into Portland, where I could have a choice between Multnomah County, City of Portland, State of Oregon, and several other government agency jobs (assuming I needed to look.) When I made the decision to move down to Salem, I knew I was limiting myself to State of Oregon, City of Salem, or Marion County. It’s a somewhat smaller pool in case of emergency (not that much smaller though), and the cost of housing is considerably less.

I took the risk and it’s been a good one.

My initial six months (the state’s probationary period) are almost up and things are going well (9 more days to go.) So last weekend I sat down with a realtor who attends my church and laid out my situation. She recommended trying to beat the winter blues, so burned the midnight oil cleaning the house and yard and I put the house up for sale on Friday.

I’ve been so busy with everything else going on that I’m not even 100% sure what the marketing plan is, but the realtor assured me that we had tons of showings and the price is competitive, so fingers crossed for a quick sale.

And then I’ll have to figure out what to do about moving.

More fun.

Last Update

The house being on the market is, in some ways, good timing because I’m going to be out of town a lot in the next few weeks. One of my job duties is doing financial training around the state and I have 7 scheduled in the next few week. Add the WSO convention and OFFF, and the house sitter will see Finn and the cats a lot more than I will! The realtor is thrilled.

September 14 – Ripples 2

Today’s painting is another try at ripples and I’m pretty pleased. Compare to my September 4 attempt!

rawI ran out of time and didn’t get a chance to finish some areas, so I think it looks better with a certain amount of cropping.

croppedAnd yes, if you’re counting, I’m three paintings behind. But it’s a 30 paintings in 30 days challenge and I’m hoping to catch up!

Cover Reveal: Caskets from Costco

One of the best things about my Weight Watchers journey had been the friends I’ve made. Author, humorist, mother, and Weight Watcher Kelly Wilson has been one of the gems along this journey. When she posted on her blog, Wilson Writes, that her book Caskets from Costco was going into reprint, I was excited to offer her a guest spot on my blog. I can’t wait to read this and I hope you’ll add it to your list too.

Caskets from Costco

Kelly Wilson

Genre: Memoir

Release Date: November 2, 2015

 

Gravity Imprint of Booktrope Publishing

Blurb:

For twenty years, I thought that I had been marching through the stages of grief in a straight line. I had been following the formula, crossing each processed grief experience off my list.

Except that I was totally deluded. And I didn’t discover that until Jim, my beloved father-in-law, died. I found myself drying off from my shower the morning after his death, really hoping he couldn’t see me naked. Or, if he could, that he was averting his eyes.

From that moment, my path through grief resembled a roller coaster, spiraling and twisting and turning, circling back around. Echoes of past trauma, including childhood abuse and cheating death, would no longer be ignored. I somehow needed to get from the beginning to the end of this grief adventure, and I don’t have a good sense of direction.

But what is always present during a journey through grief, regardless of the path chosen?

Hope.

Caskets From Costco is a funny book about grief that demonstrates the certainty of hope and healing in an uncertain and painful world.

Author:

Kelly Wilson

Kelly Wilson is an author and comedian who entertains and inspires with stories of humor, healing, and hope. As a survivor of childhood sexual abuse, Kelly writes and speaks about finding hope in the process of recovery. Through both stand-up and improv comedy, she brings laughter to audiences of all ages using a wide range of subject matter, including silly songs, parenting stories, and jokes and anecdotes revolving around mental health issues.

Kelly is the author of Live Cheap & Free, Don’t Punch People in the Junk, and Caskets From Costco, along with numerous articles and short stories for children and adults. She currently writes for a living and lives with her Magically Delicious husband, junk-punching children, dog, cat, and stereotypical minivan in Portland, Oregon.

 

Social Media Links:

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/WilsonWrites

Twitter: https://twitter.com/KW_Writes

LinkedIn: www.linkedin.com/in/wilsonwrites

Google+: https://plus.google.com/u/0/+KellyWilsonWrites

Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/6548683.Kelly_Wilson

Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/user/wilsonwrites/feed

Multnomah Falls Hike

This weekend my Weight Watchers group hiked to the top of Multnomah Falls.

groupThis is something I would never have thought I could do.

falls2A moderate, 2.2-mile hike with 700 feet of elevation gain to the top of Multnomah Falls.

I have to be honest. If they think this is “moderate” I don’t even want to know what difficult might be like. Though we took a lot of breathing breaks and stopped frequently to admire the scenery, this might  make my top 25 most uncomfortable days.

But we (ALL OF US) made it to the top. And it was worth it. Even the soreness the next day was worth it.

Along the way I thought a lot about how this hike could apply to my lifestyle change journey. There are a lot of similarities: difficult but worth it, better with friends, taking frequent breaks, many switchbacks / changes of direction, enjoying the journey.

In the end, when I hit that highest point, I was just glad to be done.

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September 8-11: Regularly scheduled painting

September 8

sept8I like how this turned out in general. However, I figured out that water, even when it’s dark, needs to “read” light. Light bulb moment.

September 9

I have some ‘splaining to do.

September 10

I tried to catch up and do two paintings.

sept10I ended up with one weak painting.

September 11

sept11I really like this. I think the reflection needs to be a little blurrier, even though it really wasn’t. And it read more like water than previous attempts. Interestingly, I added a gray way over the water and then it really looked like water.

Reedsport & Elk

We’ll be back to our regularly scheduled painting tomorrow, but I’ve spend the last couple of days down in Reedsport giving a training for work and I have some great photos to show.

ospreyandbridgeSeptember 8 – Elk Viewing

September 9 – Site Visit

September 7 – Abstracts are hard

My Facebook artist friends are always getting me into trouble. That’s my story, and I’ll stick to it. Among the worst culprits is Ruth Armitage whose abstract work I both love and fear. Or, it’s probably more accurate to say, I’m deeply jealous of her ability with abstracts.

A couple weeks ago a co-worker purchased “Ripples” and this reminded me of my vague threats to do more abstract work (as it is a fun process).

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This 30 Paintings in 30 Days challenge seems a good time to work on this threat, and I even have an idea!

A few months ago I watched a highly touted video (A Designed Approach to Abstraction)  by artist John Salminen who came to WSO a year or so before I came a member and whose workshop is still talked about. In the video, Mr. Salminen talks about designing an abstract by drawing three (basically random) things and then overlapping them.

The other day I was in a (boring) meeting and created an abstract idea.

abstractideaMy artist goals for this weekend was to work on the chapter in Celebrate Your Creative Self about saving whites. This seemed like a good project to work on.

abstractAbstracts are hard. It’s not hopeless, but I’m not sure where to go next.